âIf I may draw your attention to your left. Here you see Madame Tannarive. In her will she left detailed instruction that her body should be mummified.â
The small tour group gasped when they saw a middle-aged woman, so lifelike, sitting at a round table, prepared with tea and biscuits, encased in a glass box. Her hands folded on her lap as if waiting to be served.
âShe is having her afternoon tea. And now let us move on to the next roomâŚâ
A woman stayed behind, admiring Madame Tannariveâs pearl necklace, till she stood up and approached the glass.
In 2024 letâs broaden our horizons with a weekly writing challenge that calls upon us all to write a story using the prompts below. Just a few guidelines otherwise it wouldnât be a real challenge now would it:
More than 100 words but no more than 200 words.
Must use the WORD of the WEEK in your story.
Must use at least 2 of the 3 prompts provided (person / place / thing).
Must use pen/pencil and paper! No typing out this story, yaâll!
Letâs become one with our scribbling handwriting and tell a great story!
WORD OF THE WEEK
PERSON | PLACE | THING
Once you have a story, copy/paste it in the comments! I canât wait to read what you come up with.
BONUS
If you want an added challenge, write a story using the WotW, all 3 prompts, PLUS is exactly 200 words in length.
The funeral procession continued well into the night. It was his wishes. To allow his best friends, his only friends, the owls, say their last goodbye. He spent his nights in the woods behind his home, talking to the owls who listened up in the trees.
Little did his family know what he told the owls to do if he died.
As they pushed his casket, on wheels, through the woods, the rhythmic hooting echoed around them. One flew down and landed on the casket. Then another. And another. Till there were dozens. Their heads turned to the future victims.
Sitting at a desk in his study was a rather small man. From behind he was rather nondescript. He wore his favorite bowler hat, and gloves with the finger tips exposed. The room was dark, except for one candle that he used to light the notebook he scribbled in.
Hunched, his blazer frayed at the elbows, his bare feet dangled, barely touching the floor. He let them swing aimlessly as he took comfort in the sound of the quill pen scratching the paper.
He spent years working on his memoirs and finally he had the perfect title: The Murderous Imp
The pain was unbearable but necessary if she was to join her family at the Festival of Lights. She had to go it alone. As much as her mother wanted to be there, hold her hand, wipe her brow, she kept her distance. They all kept their distance.
When the screams started it was visceral. Her skin tore. Two parallel slits on her back. After her screams subsided, the sobs began. She would need to survive the release of her wings. Wet with blood, they unfurled and spread. Each flap felt new but familiar. She was ready. She was reborn.
The story you are about to read may be based on a true story. Names and locations have been changed to protect the innocent and the dead.
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Suddenly, thick dark clouds rolled in and covered what little sun was peaking through. It was only two in the afternoon but it felt and looked like it was the middle of the night. Nat pulled her jacket closed tighter around herself, put her head down against the wind, and power walked all the way back to her apartment, looking over her shoulder every now and then. Was someone following her, watching her? She couldnât shake the feeling.
Back at her apartment she took off her jacket and hung it up, leaving the note in the pocket. She didnât want to see it anymore. Then it dawned on her that her phone had not once pinged or rang in all this time, which was odd for her.
Nat pulled her phone out of her pocket to see she had ten missed calls from Bernice! She was not one for sending a text message ever. She also never left a voicemail either, except this time she did. That couldnât be good. Nat gulped when she saw the one unheard voicemail left from Bernice. She tapped the message and put it on speaker:
âNat, I sweat to God if you donât pick up your damn phone! Today was not a day for you to be playing hooky from me. The cops were just here. Seems someone over there reads our magazine. I lied, for you, and told them youâd be in right away. Well, here we are several hours later and they walked into my damn office, Nat! The police were here. God damnit!â There were muffled sounds. Bernice had put her phone to her chest to scream at someone who interrupted her phone call. Nat couldnât quite make out what was being said. âOkay, hereâs what you need to know cause Iâm not covering for your ass on this one. I gave them your address. Had to or they wouldnât leave. So, good luck explaining yourself. ItâsâŚâ There was another pause. Nat could picture Bernice throwing her right arm out and flicking her wrist towards herself to get a look at the current time. Never mind the fact that she could just as easily see the time on her computer in front of her. ââŚ1:45pm now. Shit. Iâm late for an appointment.â And that was the end of the voicemail.Â
The ease and calm that Nat had for most of the day had disappeared almost as quickly as it had arrived and she was left with a sinking feeling in the pit of her stomach. The police were interested, very much so, in her story. She cursed Kate out loud and shook her fist in the air at no one before throwing her phone, with considerable force, into her cushioned couch. It bounced and landed face down on the rug on the floor. Kate was an excellent liar.
Frozen in place, Nat surveyed her apartment. For a place to hide? No. Theyâd probably break down the door. Anything incriminating she needed to hide? The typewriter? Yes! She grabbed it and looked around for a place that could hide such a large and heavy object. Her stove? Yes! Perfect!
Crouching down in her kitchen and holding it precariously on one leg with one hand she used the other to pull open the oven door. She never cooked so there was only one rack that was in the lowest slot, leaving just enough room for her to place the typewriter inside. There was a paper that was in the typewriter that she reached in to read, not having noticed it earlier, but was interrupted by a knock on her apartment door.
Less of a knock and more of a banging, actually.
She slammed the oven door shut, rubbed her hands on her pants to try and wipe away the sweat and took a few deep breaths before she opened her front door with a smile.
Just on the other side of the door were two police officers. One male. One female.Â
The man stood behind the woman, both in uniform, both carrying a gun in their holsterâs.
âAre you Natalie Winter?â The female officer made a point of looking over Natâs shoulder into the apartment, casing the place before they were even allowed entry. For some reason Nat couldnât stop her over the top Cheshire Cat grin as she managed to nod her head âyesâ to the officers. âCan we come in? We just have a couple questions about your story.â The female officer snapped her fingers over her shoulder to the male cop behind her. He was clearly younger, fresh out of the academy. He quickly handed his colleague a rolled up magazine over her shoulder.Â
âOf course,â Nat said, stepping to one side, her grin beginning to hurt her face. âI must say, when my boss called me to say the police were interested in my little storyâŚI was shockedâŚâ Her voice cracked when she let out the last three words and suddenly her throat went very dry. She needed water. Anything to keep her hands busy so theyâd stop shaking from fright.
The two officers entered her apartment, their black boots stomping on the hardwood floor. They both rested their hands on their massive belt they wore around their waists.
âIâm Officer Halloran, and this hereâs my partner, Officer Kirt.â
Nat waved at each of them instead of shaking their hands which made her feel stupid as she walked between them towards her kitchen to get a glass of water for herself. As she poured the glass she turned back to them and asked, âCan I get you two something?â
âNo thank you. As we said, we just had a couple questions about your story. Itâs nearly identical to the statement we released to the press only twenty four hours ago and we were just wondering, how you came to write your story?â
Nat downed the glass of water completely and as she was about to put the glass down in the sink she heard a familiar click. She let go of the glass and gripped the edge of the sink. It shattered as it fell from her hand.
âAre you alright?â Officer Halloran asked.
âYes, of course,â Nat answered quickly. âIâm just so clumsy. Always have been.â She wondered if they heard it too.
Another tapping sound and her knees buckled a bit. The damn typewriter was typing again! She thought. But she mustnât let on. Clearly they would think she was crazy or something. Nat managed to gain enough composure to walk back across the living room floor and sit on her couch.Â
Tap. Tap. Tap. Ding.
It reached the end of the line and was working its way to the next line. Surely they heard that. Though their facial expression didnât change much from that of concern for Natâs sudden behavior.
âAnyway, you wanted to know about the story right? Well, itâs fiction, see. Just fiction. Not sure why a made up story would interest the police,â Nat said, rubbing her hands on her pants again. A defense mechanism she did even as a child to calm herself whenever she felt stressed. The feel of the fabric of clothing on the palm of her hands. Tap. Tap. Tap. Always made her feel better.
Nat looked over at the oven she could see from where she was seated then looked back at the officers. She hoped they hadnât noticed her subtle glance in its direction.
âThatâs just it, Ms. Winter, if it were made up then it wouldnât describe our killer so vividly. Did someone tell you about him beforehand? Cause if thatâs what happened here we canâŚâ
Suddenly, Nat could no longer hear what Officer Halloran was saying. All she could hear was the slow and methodical tapping. Tap. Tap. Tap. Tapping. Ding. Next line.
Nat was terribly thirsty again. She looked over at the oven. No. Now she looked at Officer Kirt. He eyed Nat suspiciously. She appeared more and more distressed. He followed her eyes the next time they darted to the kitchen.
He took a step towards the kitchen and Nat jumped to her feet.
âYes, youâre right. Yep. Thatâs exactly how it happened,â Nat said. Her voice very high pitched and shaky now.Â
âWhat happened, exactly?â Officer Halloran asked, stepping in front of Nat to block her view of what Officer Kirt was doing as he made his way towards the kitchen. Towards the oven.
Tap. Tap. Tap. Pause. Tap tap tap. Pause. TAP TAP TAP.
DING.
The typing just got louder. Maybe it was because of the oven. A typewriter in an enclosed space surely would echo when the keys were pressed. Yes, thatâs it, Nat thought to herself.
âWhatâs he doing?â Nat asked, stepping on tip toe to see over Officer Halloranâs shoulder. But it was too late. Officer Kirt already had his hand on the oven and as he opened it, Nat let out a blood curdling scream, âNNNNOOOO!!!!â
Officer Halloran helped Nat to sit back down on the couch while Officer Kirt carefully removed the red typewriter from the oven. He put it down on the desk and with a gloved hand lifted the page that was in it to read it. Nat slowly turned her head to read the words:
Typed over and over and over again on the page. What happened after that is a bit of a blur for Nat.Â
âItâs good that you keep coming by to see her. She needs all the friends and support she can get,â Doctor Emil said. He was an elderly gentleman. Gray hair. Thick rimmed reading glasses that dangled around his neck. He wore a white coat over his white button-up shirt and brown tie. He clutched a clipboard to his chest as he watched Nat through a two-way mirror.
Nat was sitting at a desk that was in front of a window overlooking a lush green yard outside. She just sat at the desk, unmoving, while she could hear muffled voices behind her, on the other side of her mirror. She knew they were talking about her.
âHow much longer do you think sheâll be like this, doctor?â Kate asked. She has been visiting Nat ever since she was admitted. Even took on her case when the state arrested her and charged her as the shadow killer.
âThat all depends on when sheâs willing to tell me who wrote that confession. She still wonât admit it was her all along.â
They both stood at the window watching her. Then they heard it, same as Nat heard it that day in her apartment. Tap. Tap. Tap. Tap. Tap. Tap. Tap. Pause. Tap. Tap. Tap. Tap. Tap. Ding.
Nat looked down at the typewriter on her desk. The one thing she was allowed to keep. Her doctor insisting it would help with her recovery.
A visit to Maraniganâs Shop yields unexpected results (and help) from Jan, the current owner, when they discover the kingâs guardsmen are now looking for them in connection with the sighting of a deck of cards.
TOLD FROM THE POV OF CHARISMA
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The rest of the evening was a blur for Charisma. She remembers putting the deck back in her pocket and making some excuse to the others for some space. She needed to think about what sheâd just been told. Performing at the colosseum was a long time dream of hers ever since she was old enough to accompany her father to work and watch him craft a wand special for a magician. She wanted a wand of her very own. A thing she could never own.
Being a magician was a manâs world and the only space that women were allowed to occupy in it was as assistants to the magic trick being performed. They wore scantily clad outfits on stage and waved their arms about to deflect the audiences attention from the truth behind the trick.
When Charisma was lucky enough to get a job at the colosseum she knew it would be the closest sheâd ever get to fulfilling her dream and she made sure not to waste a moment of it. Whenever the annual performances happened she volunteered to work the floor. This gave her access backstage to all the acts and in many cases, she even figured out how they really worked though she would never reveal what she knows to anyone.
Upon leaving the pub she was met by a throng of young boys waving their very own magician wands in the air, laughing and joking with each other. She wondered where their parents were, letting them stay out this late at night. There was a chill in the air and she welcomed how it awakened her senses. Without much thought she pointed herself in a direction that led her closer to the colosseum and started to walk.Â
She heard horse hooves in the distance pulling carriages and merchants shouting across the road to each other as they started to close their shops for the night. There was also the familiar smell of late night restaurants and pubs preparing for the evening crowds. Usually men after work looking for a quick bite to eat or ale to drink before headed home to the meal they could barely stomach.
Pretty soon Charisma found herself stopped in front of a magic shop. But not just any magic shop. This was her favorite place to visit as a child and it was still where sheâd end up whenever she wanted to escape the shouting matches between her mother and father and eventually the shouting matches between her and her father. It felt safe and warm and welcoming. It also helped that the owner encouraged her love of magic, promising to never tell a soul about it.
Charisma pulled open the door and walked in, immediately shutting out the sounds from outside and setting her in silence. She wasnât surprised the place was empty. It usually was slow in the evenings though Jan kept it open late just in case there was a magician emergency.Â
Maraniganâs shop wasnât the only magic shop in Wondermere. Truth be told, there were dozens of them but it was Maraniganâs that was open from the very beginning and it was the staple for any true magician to avail themselves of the very best. If they could afford it, that is. The other shops were more for tourists and magicians who were not as successful.Â
âWell hello there, stranger. I havenât seen you inâŚâ Jan appeared as if out of nowhere, usually from the tucked away back room, with hands on hips, thinking. âWhat is it?â Jan could tell something was wrong. Anytime Charisma visited she was either bubbly and excited about something sheâd just heard or discovered while working backstage at the colosseum, or she was looking for a place to hide from the outside world. Jan could tell it was the latter this time.
Without a word Charisma pulled out the deck of cards from her pocket and held it out to Jan who knew what it was and quickly locked the door so no one could come in.
âJan, Iâm in trouble,â Charisma said before exhaling deeply. She had been holding in so much emotion and she couldnât any longer. The tears came before her words and Jan just listened, trying to make out the words that came blubbering out of Charismaâs shaky voice.
After a while Charisma stopped talking and they just remained together in silence for a bit until Jan left her to put the kettle on.
While Jan was gone, Charisma had a chance to realize all she had just said. But she wasnât worried that Jan would turn her over to the king or his guardsmen. Jan was good at keeping secrets.
After Jan was born the Maranigan family had to become expert secret keepers. Starting with the baby that shouldâve been born a boy. For hundreds of years Maraniganâs Magic Shop was owned and operated by the men in their family. It made sense. No magician would ever buy any magic if it were being sold by a woman. Itâs common knowledge and tradition that magic is performed by men. To keep the business afloat and in good standing with the magician community a man had to run the business always.
Then Jan was born. A beautiful baby girl with a full head of dark curls and hazel eyes. The day she was put into her motherâs arms by a close family friend who helped with the pregnancy, there were tears in everyoneâs eyes but they were not of joy. Janâs mother didnât make it but her dying wish was for her husband to do what needed to be done to keep the shop going for everyoneâs sake.
Janâs father knew what his wife mean. With her gone their entire livelihood rested on the shoulders of a baby. He also had to deal with his sister who ran away from home the first chance she got. Last known to have a family of her own in a far off land. Rumor has it, she had a son, who, by rights should be the owner of Maraniganâs Shop were it not for the recorded birth of a beautiful baby boy. Dark curly hair. Hazel eyes.
For the rest of her life, Jan was to dress as a boy. To everyone who came round and to all her close friends, she was a boy. And it didnât bother her much to do so. Jan always felt the boys got to have more fun anyhow. The burden was on her father who kept it till the day he died. The shop left to Jan, she didnât have to carry the weight of it all on her own. Eventually, she shared her secret with a childhood friend who agreed to live with her as husband and wife.
Jan also shared her secret with Charisma and Flossie. Her father told her why it needed to be kept a secret but she felt the more people in her life who knew the easier it would be not to lie.
When Jan came back with a tray of tea and biscuits, Charisma was feeling better. The shock having worn off.
âWhat should I do?â Charisma asked Jan. She felt it was a question Jan would surely have an answer to. She couldnât ask Flossie. She knew what Flossie would say. That she had to go through with it, learn magic and show those men what a woman could do. And Felix, well, as a former magician heâd likely think this all was a bit too dangerous for her to undertake.
âI know what I would do,â Jan said. âIâd hide. But, hiding is what I do best,â she said, motioning to her store. âI have to hide or I risk losing everything. But youâre different, Charisma. You never had to spend your life under the mask of a lie. You have little to lose.â
âIt sounds like youâre saying I should do it,â Charisma said, a chuckle in her throat that came up involuntarily. âYou were the last person Iâd think would tell me that.â
âYou came to me for honesty. Not more lies. I envy you. Your whole life ahead of you. To do with whatever you want. Iâm trapped under the weight of magic that was here long before I was born and will surely outlive me.â
Jan sipped the tea she made and looked towards the door of her shop. On the other side she could see Flossie waving frantically trying to get her attention. Beside her an older gentleman who she guessed to be the Felix that Charisma told her about.
âYour friends are here,â Jan said, motioning her to turn round.
Charisma was equally excited and exhausted to see the concerned faces of Flossie and Felix looking at her on the other side of the door.
Jan unlocked and opened the door, a jingle of bells as they rushed inside.
âClose it quickly. Do you have somewhere where we can not be seen from the street?â Felix asked, dispensing with introductions. Charisma thought they were just looking for her out of concern but realized it was for a more immediate reason and danger.
Without saying a word, Jan closed and locked the door. She pulled closed curtains that were on the door, meant to keep out the morning sun then prying eyes. Then she beckoned them to follow her through the maze of her store towards the back. It was an opening that led to where the excess stock was kept in crates and boxes. Not exactly as private as Felix wouldâve liked but he supposed it would have to do for now. He started to speak when Jan pushed aside large crates that looked much heavier than they actually were. Under them was a handle that Jan grabbed and pulled up to reveal a trap door. She held it open while Felix, Flossie and Charisma walked down the stairs. Jan followed behind them letting the lid slam shut above her.
Left in pitch darkness, none of them moved, except Jan, who knew exactly where to go to produce light. She side stepped past Charisma and ran her hand along the stone wall till her hand touched the familiar bronze lantern. She found the turnkey and twisted it a quarter turn to produce just enough light to see everyoneâs faces. Only Flossie looked fascinated by where they were and was antsy to see where the secret tunnel would lead.
Jan unhooked the lantern and used it to lead the way down a long tunnel that seemed to never end. Above them they could hear the familiar sounds of footfalls from people walking and the occasional trot of horses hooves. Charisma guessed by the sounds and length of time they spent walking that they were headed across the street but underground.
They reached the end of the tunnel and turned right to find a locked door. Jan pulled out a key she wore around her neck and used it to open the door for them to all enter. Once inside she no longer needed the lantern. There was an overhead light that was already on, as if they were expected.
âHowâs this?â Jan asked, winking over at Felix who was impressed. He thought he knew of all the secret tunnels and places throughout Wondermere but clearly he was proven wrong.
âWhy all the secrecy?â Charisma asked with a hint of sarcasm in her voice. They obviously needed to be careful what they said and who would be around when they said it, but she was hoping to have some time alone as she asked and was only given a few hours. Not nearly the amount of time she wanted.
âSomeone reported seeing the deck in the area. Anyone who isnât where they should be is being sought. That includes anyone missing from workâŚâ Flossie said.
Charisma knew that meant them. They up and left work without letting even Ms. Pomroy know what was going on or that they needed to leave. Charisma kicked herself for not confiding in Ms. Pomroy whom she trusted to at least not report her to the kingâs guardsmen if they came looking. She hated them as much as anyone else.
âShould we go to the colosseum or home?â Charisma asked.
No one answered straight away, then Jan said âneither.â All eyes turned to her for a reason. âIf they are looking for you, the best thing you can do is remain hidden for as long as possible. Iâm sure another emergency will come up that will take all their attentions off of you. Until then, you should hide.â
âAnd how do you suppose we do that? We donât exactly stand out but weâre not the blending in kind either,â Flossie said, looking at herself then Charisma up and down. They were in their work clothes which consisted of their usual trousers and button up blouse with their hair pulled back in a ponytail.
âI didnât lead you here for no reason. A dear friend of mine owns the shop upstairs,â Jan said.
âItâs a clothing shop,â Charisma said out loud to no one in particular.
âYes, but youâve probably only seen half of the store. Thereâs a secret place that only certain people even know exists. Itâs where I shop for my clothes,â Jan said. âHiding in plain sight is something Iâm really good at.â
âThatâs all well and good for you to dress them up to look like men. What do you propose to do to hide me?â
Flossie snorted holding back laughter. Charisma fought to hold back laughter as well.
âIâm sure we can find something suitable for yourâŚmagnetic personalityâŚâ Jan said, pushing open another door that led them into Anders Costume Shop.
It arrived in the mail. A small square box. Sky blue with a bright yellow ribbon wrapped around it. Everyone got one on their eighteenth birthday. The box and an appointment card.
My appointment was scheduled for the next day. Less time to reschedule, cancel, or back out of my citizen obligation. With shaky hands I untied the ribbon and opened the magnetic lid to reveal a glass eye. It came to life and looked at me. Scanned my face for confirmation then closed.
The next time I saw it was when I looked in the mirror. Theyâre always watchingâŚ
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