Author: Erica Drayton Writes

  • THE OMEGA GLORY | S.2.E.23

    Original air date: March 1, 1968

    SYNOPSIS

    Responding to a distress signal, Kirk finds Captain Tracey of the U.S.S. Exeter violating the prime directive and interfering with a war between the Yangs and the Kohms to find the secret of their longevity.

    CANON CONTEXT

    The title is taken from a line spoken by Juliet in William Shakespeare’s play Romeo and Juliet: “that which we call a rose / By any other name would smell as sweet”, a line quoted by Captain Kirk during the episode.

    RECAP

    NOTE: I watched this episode and wrote this review back in August. But at the time I was in the middle of moving and if you’ve ever sold one house to purchase another, then you know just how long and daunting and extremely stressful that can be. Suffice it to say, I am BACK to watch Star Trek regularly and finally move on to the next series before the New Year.

    Never bet against Star Trek. That is what I keep telling myself after watching this episode. Sure, it’s the same as every other episode I’ve seen thus far in the last two seasons. Except, I don’t know, this one hit…different? It was a combination of absolutely ridiculous and genius. The Star Trek formula?

    I want to jump to the last 15min of this episode because, the first 35min, in my opinion, are just fluff and filler. Thinking back on it, as I have been for a couple days, I can honestly say I wish there was more of ā€œthe truthā€ of what this episode was intended to represent and be than what was presented to us to ā€œstring us alongā€ because it really is quite confusing.

    Let me see if I can quickly summarize the first 35min so I can move on to the more interesting bits:

    The Enterprise is meant to rendezvous with another starship. Said starship is there but no sign of life on board. Crew on board starship have been turned to salt? Kirk, Bones, and Spock beam down to planet nearby to find out what has happened. They find captain of starship alive but very much crazy. He believes he’s found a version of the fountain of youth on the planet which only works as long as he remains on the planet with the people. In hindsight he should’ve realized why that is but we’ll get to that later. He’s made himself the leader of one of the groups there who are at war with the Yangs.

    Now, this is where it starts to get ā€œdifferentā€ as I mentioned earlier. Yes, there is a femme fatale. But not how we expect her to be in a usual Star Trek episode up to this point. She is far from helpless even if she is being held behind bars by her enemy.

    As you can see, she’s got all the protection she needs for a man who seems, by all accounts, to be quite a neanderthal. Turns out he is far from it. But let’s fast forward to the very end. Where it all begins to ā€œmake senseā€ if you call some garbled language that clearly sounds familiar to any ā€œAmericanā€ watching and listening.

    Turns out that our history and our way of existing as one nation and all that will survive even thousands of years from now. Even if ā€œmanā€ were to regress back to caveman ways, they will still understand and learn and incorporate the same ideals. Even down to the pledge of allegiance…

    DID THEY REALLY SAY THAT?

    Cloud William: Ay plegli ianectu flaggen, tupep like for stahn…

    Captain James T. Kirk: And to the Republic for which it stands, one Nation, under God, indivisible, with Liberty and Justice for all.

  • Lady Tabitha | A 100 Word Story

    #185 Ace of Quills

    ā€œDo you often interrupt will readings with accusations of murder?ā€ Lady Tabitha asked, surrounded by her four children.

    ā€œYou will have to excuse me, Lady Tabitha, but I assume you want me to bring the killer of your husband to justice?ā€

    She held out a cigarette for her doting son-in-law to light. ā€œMy dear inspector, whatever gave you that impression? Whoever killed him did us a favor. Are you suggesting one of us did it?ā€

    ā€œI don’t make suggestions or accusations. I am absolutely sure of it. And you’re next.ā€

    ā€œI welcome death. I doubt the killer feels the same.ā€

    Click on a card below to learn more about the Tarot deck that inspired this story:

    Ace of Quills

  • 'Tis the Season for MORE Stories! šŸ”„

    What I’m Writing this November and into 2024

    Dear Reader,

    I can’t believe it’s already November. Halloween has come and gone. And I’ve hand written 31 stories in 31 days! I wasn’t the only one! There were countless others who joined me and for that I am eternally grateful and proud to be counted among them. The fun of Pentober will continue in 2024 so if you didn’t get to join us in October, fret not!

    In the spirit of the Spooky Season coming to a close. Here is our 12’ Skelly and his two pooches! A real conversation piece for the neighborhood, for sure.

    Now, onto what’s next for Pentober:

    Pentober Camp – Two additional months out of the year (apart from October) where the entire month will encourage handwriting stories! These months will be different as it will involve more prompts to get your creative juices flowing. The proposed months for Camp are: February and June 2024 (save the dates!)

    Pentober52 – You will need to opt IN to receive these emails. They will go out weekly, every Wednesday, starting on January 3rd. Keep reading for more details.

    MY 100 WORD STORY JOURNEY CONTINUES

    November will bring two 100 word story themes: Literary Tarot and Substack Publication Name. While many of you will be working on NaNoWriMo, I will be toiling away on adding another 30 stories, bringing me to my 200th story on November 16th.

    December will bring a change of pace for writing journey. I will be participating in Advent, creating my own ā€œcalendar of short storiesā€ that will run from Sunday, December 3rd – Sunday, December 24. The other days of the month will a mash-up of Holiday Cheer with a sprinkle of left-over Halloween Scare! The final suit for the Literary Tarot will conclude in February 2024.

    CALLING ALL WRITERS OF FICTION

    For 15 weeks I have collaborated with some AMAZING writers here on Substack and now I’m giving all of YOU an opportunity to join me! Every Free Writing Friday in November & December I will write 50 Words to go with the image prompt and I want YOU to add YOUR 50 words to my story! You’ll have all weekend long to contribute to my story. On Monday I’ll select my favorite and share that winning collaboration on my Substack Notes! There will be more information included in the next Free Writing Friday email, November 3rd.

    Are you up for the challenge?

    100 WORD STORIES ARCHIVE

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    31 May 2023 Stories | 30 June 2023 Stories | 31 July 2023 Stories | 31 August 2023 Stories | 30 September 2023 Stories | 31 October 2023 Stories


    EDITORIALS YOU MAY HAVE MISSED


    HEARD ROUND THE STACKS

    I want to shout out Mark for his excellence in fiction but also for his amazing participation in the first annual Pentober 2023! He showed up every day for 31 days of great storytelling and I hope you will read them as well as give him a well deserved subscribe! Till 2024 Mark, I look forward to it. And. I hope to see you when Pentober52 rolls around as well šŸ˜‰ā€¦


    WHAT I’M READING

    Okay, I’m technically not reading it now but I’m getting myself ready for a 19 month read through, and literary learning, of The Pickwick Papers by Charles Dickens. It is known as the first ever serialized fiction novel of the nineteenth century and seeing as I’ll be finally throwing my hat in the ring with other amazing serials being written here on Substack, I could think of no better literary work to read. Want to join me? The serial will begin in March. Sign-up now and let’s read this great work together. It can be found in the public domain.

    WARNING: This book is just shy of 300k words! We begin reading March 2024 and finish October 2025! Yes, that’s quite a commitment.
  • Some Perspective About the Substack Fiction Community

    and why maybe we all need to take a chill pill

    This might be considered a bit of a ā€œhot takeā€ but (and I’m just as guilty of this as the next person) Substack is not strictly a fiction community. What I mean by that is, it helps sometimes to take a step back and try to realize we are just a small microcosm of the full depth and breath that Substack has to offer to all who visit. I’ve noticed of late (and in the past) many of us (again, myself included) will hem and haw about the lack of fiction representation within the posts that Substack themselves push out there in their weekly and monthly round-ups. Sure, they will mention notables like and or even , but the little guys look up and think, ā€œthey don’t really need any shout outs to grow their audienceā€ and wish we were mentioned instead. As I’ve said (and won’t mention again) I feel the same way and there are some days I echo this sentiment publicly and the rest of the time I hold that envy inside.

    But then I decided to exercise a little perspective with Substack as a whole to try and understand if my feelings of abandonment are valid. Here are a few things I discovered:

    1. Substack started in 2017. Just 6 years ago.

    2. In the last 6 years they have grown to have thousands of Substack writers sending out emails regularly.

    3. Many of those users of Substack (myself included) brought with them lists from other platforms that number in the thousands and hundreds of thousands and these emails have zero clue what Substack is, let alone how to navigate it should they choose to find out.

    4. Substack claims there are over 500,000 paid subscribers across all of the writers on Substack and millions of visitors to the site.

    So, when I see numbers like that my brain starts to calculate immediately. As some of you may know, I’ve been on a mission to uncover and track every single fiction Substack that exists. This includes poetry, artists, and musicians. It has not been an easy task to undertake but in about 2 months I managed to find 300 (so far)! That might seem like a hell of a lot until you use some perspective to realize that 300 is a small percentage of the whole pie that makes up the different categories of Substack.

    Is it safe to say that Substack might look a lot like Medium, in that there is a larger proportion of non-fiction/journalists using the platform than fiction? Maybe. But the level of community that Substack instills and puts into their community as a whole is what makes all the difference in the world.

    In fact, I place the blame for why so many of us feel so jilted by Substack squarely on Substack’s shoulders! If not for their amazing algorithm that puts us all together in Notes so that we can connect easily with each other, we probably would realize just how many ā€œotherā€ users there are. We are, by design, living in a bubble and when that happens we can become blind to the obvious.

    Sure, fiction is a HUGE presence on Substack but I wouldn’t expect it to be included in every single shout out post that they make or to be a priority because there are far more other categories with bigger audiences.

    Could Substack do more to make us feel less left out? Sure. What that solution is, I cannot say at this time. Perhaps they could extend an olive branch to some lesser known fiction writers and provide a bit of a hand up as opposed to a hand out?

    We all appreciate the rapid fire updates but what we really need is more visible assistance for the little guy and less coddling of the big fish. We know the big fish pay your bills, keep the lights on, all that good stuff, but think how many more big fish you’d have to draw from if you focused more on us. They don’t need your help or support or guidance. The big fish have done a pretty good job of proving just how well they know how to do their thing.

  • Haunted House | A 100 Word Story

    #184 Pentober 2023

    Special thanks to Nishant Jain for letting us use his tiny people to tell a story.

    Want to join me in handwriting your next story? Read all about Pentober HERE. And share your submission in the comments below!

  • Nightmare | A 100 Word Story

    #183 Pentober 2023

    Special thanks to Nishant Jain for letting us use his tiny people to tell a story.

    Want to join me in handwriting your next story? Read all about Pentober HERE. And share your submission in the comments below!

  • Levitation | A 100 Word Story

    #182 Pentober 2023

    Special thanks to Nishant Jain for letting us use his tiny people to tell a story.

    Want to join me in handwriting your next story? Read all about Pentober HERE. And share your submission in the comments below!

  • Full Moon | A 100 Word Story

    #181 Pentober 2023

    Special thanks to for letting us use his tiny people to tell a story.

    Want to join me in handwriting your next story? Read all about Pentober HERE. And share your submission in the comments below!

  • Tattoo | A 100 Word Story

    #180 Pentober 2023

    Want to join me in handwriting your next story? Read all about Pentober HERE. And share your submission in the comments below!

  • Free Writing Fridays #025

    Your 100 Word Story

    Let’s get this weekend write-life started! From this Friday forward, I’ll include an image prompt and a few words to get your brain percolating towards a story. But only if you need it! Write whatever sparks joy for you.

    Here’s how:

    • Exactly 100 words. Not 99 or 101. The Word Count Police are tracking!

    • Genre? Writer’s choice! So long as you give us all the thrills and the feels.

    • To Fic or to Non-Fic? You decide. What matters most is that you’re satisfied with the output.

    • Copy/paste your words in the comments, then share on your own Substack, and maybe, share to social media!

    • A Note on Substack Notes | Click the šŸ”„ ā€œRestack with a Noteā€ and copy/paste your story for added reach and growth.

    IMAGE PROMPT

    This ain’t no Charlie Brown Pumpkin Patch! I wonder what really goes on at a pumpkin patch in the middle of the night. Especially one that just appears out of nowhere in the middle of a cornfield (perhaps?)…

    REMINDER: You don’t have to write your story just on Fridays! Take this sentiment and free write all weekend long!

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