Why do I see him at every station? Just standing there, on the platform, staring at me. And when the train starts to leave the station he waves at me. As if saying goodbye.
I just have to keep it together for one more day. But at every station I want to jump off and confront him. Ask him why heâs following me? Why doesnât he get on the damn train?
Iâm keeping a count of how many times Iâve seen him in my notebook to pass the time.
The Enterprise crew investigates the disappearance of a ship’s crew on a planet that is a modern version of the Roman Empire.
CANON CONTEXT
In the episode, Captain Kirk and his companions are forced to fight in gladiatorial games on a planet resembling the Roman Empire, but possessing mid-20th century Earth technology.
Its name is a reference to the phrase “bread and circuses” taken from the Satire X written by the poet Juvenal. In modern usage, the phrase implies a populace distracted from greater issues by the base pleasures of food and entertainment.
RECAP
The Prime Directive. Itâs leaned on in the most interesting ways. This one is no different, Iâm afraid. The basic tenet of such a directive is, that should anyone from the federation make contact with those who are outside of it, they should make no mention of its existence nor interfere with their way of life in any way, shape, or form.
Of course, there would be no show if there wasnât some form of interference. A few episodes back we saw such an interference that led to the declaration of independence and other such historical inferences.
In this episode, however, the interference leads us down a slightly more biblical (and political) path.
We must, however, start with the distress call. This call leads them to a location that is all but destroyed. They follow the debris to a planet that is, as always ânot unlike Earthâ except they may not be as technologically advanced. So, the question becomes, what century are they mimicking?
Kirk, Spock, and the good doctor, McCoy, take a trip to the planetâs surface to learn more. Upon arrival they are apprehended by slaves who are revolting against the ruling class that is a mix of Roman and television. If the gladiator games were televised. Oh what a lovely world this would beâŠ
Kirk, and the others, dress the part so they donât stand out quite as much as Spockâs ears and finally locate the person theyâve been after. A commander of a mercenary ship that is sort of like a hired contractor to the federation. So, it makes sense that while he should follow the prime directive of the federation, he seems to take certain liberties with how exactly it should be followed.
And, lest we forget, this episode would not be complete without a femme fatale for Kirk. She is not necessarily in need of immediate rescuing, but her orders, simple as they may seem, are to please Kirk. What better way than by food, drink, and the obligatory make-out sessionâŠ
With the brief interlude out of the way, we commence with the fighting. They sure do love their battles. If I never see another battle it will be too soon.
Spock and McCoy fight while Kirk watches. Of course, Spock is victorious. As if there would ever be any doubt of that!
Meanwhile, on the Enterprise, my favorite character, Scotty, is in charge. He was given a signal by Kirk not to interfere but he did also convey that they are in danger. So, Scotty gets down to figuring out his own loophole of how to help without interfering, with Uhura watching in awe and admiration. That duo shouldâve had more screen time!
To make my already long recap of this episode even longer, with a distraction coming from the Enterprise, Kirk and the others manage to get beamed back on board, leaving behind the man they came to rescue. Unfortunately, he was a casualty of this whole mess. I canât say Iâll miss him, even if he did end up helping his fellow starfleet men to escape.
Uhura explains that the âsunâ the people down on the planet are worshipping isnât what Kirk and the others believe it to be. In fact, they are worshiping the âsonâ of God. They are just a few centuries behind us, crawling ever so slowly towards a future that rids them of Romans and their games.
And for a brief moment, Kirk wonders how amazing it would be to relive that turn of time all over again.
Bread (Son of God) and Circuses (Gladiators and Romans). Clever. Very clever.
DID THEY REALLY SAY THAT?
[last lines]
Spock: [referring to Flavius] I wish we could’ve examined that belief of his more closely. It seems illogical for a sun worshiper to develop a philosophy of total brotherhood. Sun worship is usually a primitive superstition religion.
Uhura: I’m afraid you have it all wrong, Mister Spock, all of you. I’ve been monitoring some of their old-style radio waves, the empire spokesman trying to ridicule their religion. But he couldn’t. Don’t you understand? It’s not the sun up in the sky. It’s the Son of God.
Capt. Kirk: Caesar – and Christ. They had them both. And the word is spreading… only now.
Dr. McCoy: A philosophy of total love and total brotherhood.
Spock: It will replace their imperial Rome; but it will happen in their twentieth century.
Capt. Kirk: Wouldn’t it be something to watch, to be a part of? To see it happen all over again? Mister Chekov, take us out of orbit. Ahead warp factor one.
In 2024 letâs broaden our horizons with a weekly writing challenge that calls upon us all to write a story using the prompts below. Just a few guidelines otherwise it wouldnât be a real challenge now would it:
More than 100 words but no more than 200 words.
Must use the WORD of the WEEK in your story.
Must use at least 2 of the 3 prompts provided (person / place / thing).
WORD OF THE WEEK
PERSON | PLACE | THING
Once you have a story, copy/paste it in the comments! I canât wait to read what you come up with.
BONUS
If you want an added challenge, write a story using the WotW, all 3 prompts, PLUS is exactly 200 words in length.
There is a fifth dimension, beyond that which is known to man. It is a dimension as vast as space and as timeless as infinity. It is the middle ground between light and shadow, between science and superstition, and it lies between the pit of man’s fears and the summit of his knowledge. This is the dimension of imagination. It is an area which we call The Twilight Zone. â Rod Serling
Erica Drayton. Writer of short fiction. Puppet master to a cast of characters only she can control on the page. As she sits at her desk, even now, sheâs poised with ideas for her next kill. She unleashes a healthy dose of murder and mayhem with every finely chosen word.
Her readers. Complex and seemingly unaware. They read her words. Hunger for more. Little did they realize her next tale would be so sinister. Would hook them and trap them.
Erica Drayton is more than a storyteller. She is the writer of your ending and you didnât read her coming.
There is a fifth dimension, beyond that which is known to man. It is a dimension as vast as space and as timeless as infinity. It is the middle ground between light and shadow, between science and superstition, and it lies between the pit of man’s fears and the summit of his knowledge. This is the dimension of imagination. It is an area which we call The Twilight Zone. â Rod Serling
With her fingers interlocked, she stretched out her arms and cracked her knuckles, seated at her desk, typewriter ready to complete the scene she started earlier in the day. Behind her, on the ground, were two men frozen in time, fighting over their love of the same woman.
Her fingers hovered over the keysâŠ
They tussled for a few moments longer, yelling obscenities until Jim managed to kick Terrance away from him. They were breathing heavily. Faces scratched. Bodies aching. Jim had a bloody lip. Terrance would be nursing a black eye later.
Our story begins with Charisma and Flossie on their way home from a long day at work when they encounter a stranger on their doorstep who suddenly drops dead. But not before presenting something to Charisma that could get her killed if sheâs ever found with it.
TOLD FROM THE POV OF CHARISMA
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The coach rocked back and forth as it labored through busy streets. Charisma and Flossie sat together, along with two women much older in age sitting opposite. They leaned ever so slightly as the coach took turns at a quick pace. Charisma gripped the curtain that kept the setting sun out to steady herself.
At one crossroad they heard the coachman shout at pedestrians on foot to, âwatch where ya goinâ,â before urging the horse to continue on its way by blowing short whistles and cracking the reins on their back.
Charisma pulled the curtain back slightly to watch the setting sun through the tall buildings as they road out of central Wondermere. Once the coach passed under Tarney Bridge she knew they were safely out of the city and headed towards lower Wondermere where everyone lived.
The women on the left who sat opposite Flossie, opened one eye and pointed it right at Charisma. The light from the setting sun happened to be hitting her face at just the right angle for her to feel it and partially wake from her deep sleep. Flossie elbowed her best friend who quickly let go of the curtain. Before she could begin her apologies the woman closed her eyelid and joined her companion in their sleep.
It wasnât long before the two older women snored in perfect harmony. After weeks of traveling to and from work every morning and night it became a sort of ritual for them to gossip in the day and sleep at night. They would tell you it was from exhaustion after a long and grueling day working at the colosseum but Charisma and Flossie worked there as well, and though they were far younger they were also just as tired.
The coach was provided by the king after much discussion and negotiations between himself and Miss. Pomroy, the caretaker of the colosseum. She argued, and won the point, that her staff worked tirelessly so that the colosseum remained looking its best for the annual events. Therefore, as recompense, they needed a mode of transportation separate from everyone else. It was indeed a luxury that Charisma and Flossie did not take for granted as they knew how long it would take them if they were forced to travel on foot or by hiring their own coach which they could never afford.Â
To minimize the need to hire dozens of coaches per worker, which was a luxury the king hated being forced to provide, he insisted those who live nearest each other were to travel together and Miss. Pomroy quickly agreed. She saw it as a learning experience for everyone to get to know each other outside of the colosseum. Miss. Pomroy was always looking for ways to teach everyone, especially the youth, a lesson whether they wanted to learn one or not. Flossie always did find it interesting that Miss. Pomroy, who lived even closer to her and Charisma than their two snoring passengers, was the only one to have her own coach home.Â
And while Charisma, as always, was willing to engage in conversation with everyone she came in contact with, the older women saw the evening ride as a time to sleep before the chores of tending to the home. Charisma and Flossie soon became used to the snoring and thought of the sound as a pair of frogs conversing on a lily pad. The hats on their heads, held down loosely by hairpins, bobbed up and down but did little to wake the sleeping women.
âI hope I sleep that well when Iâm older,â Flossie said, elbowing Charisma who craned her head to look out the sliver of curtain at the sunset changing the sky from yellow to orange, then deep purple.
âNot me. I donât think I could ever grow tired of watching the sun set. Look at it. I think itâs best insideââ
âThe colosseum at night. Yes, I know. I swear if I had a pence for every time you mentioned the way the sun looks when it sets over the colosseum we could finally afford a private coach. Which would be a pity. Look at what weâd miss every night.â As if on cue, the two women opposite them snorted simultaneously. Charisma and Flossie giggled.
âYou donât understand what itâs like. To feel the suns rays on your face that brief moment before the lamps come on. The spotlight. The crowdâŠâ
Flossie crossed her legs, forgetting how close they sat to the women opposite them. Her foot kicked one of them and she woke instantly. A look of disgust on her face as she glared at Flossie, her eyes traveling from her face down to her crossed legs and back again.
âWomen have been allowed to wear trousers for years now. Makes the kind of work we do a lot easier. High time you quit turning your noses up about it,â Flossie snapped, uncrossing her legs but crossing her arms in defiance of the death stare. The older woman leaned forward, brushed her petticoat of the phantom dirt that Flossieâs shoe didnât leave behind and swiftly returned to sleep. Her snores rejoined her friendâs as if there were no interruption at all. A brief hiccup in their duet.
âYou mustnât speak to her that way. You know what a gossip she is. Ever since the whole trousers issue you know what Miss. Pomroy said. âJust because we wear them, doesnât mean we ought to start behaving ill-mannered like menââ
âIt will only lead to trouble.â Flossie parroted. âI know. A minor slip. I wonât let it happen again. Promise.â
The coach came to a sudden stop and the coachman shouted from above, slamming his foot down at the same time, âHallow Lane.â
This is where Charisma and Flossie exited the coach every night. After Charisma opened the door on her side and stepped down, she held her hand out for Flossie. No sooner did her feet touch the ground did she feel the door slam shut behind her and someone shout, âscrub!â
Without a second thought, Flossie retorted, âFUSSOCK,â as the coach pulled away, her fist waving in anger.
Charisma gripped her arm to hold her back. âYou better hope she didnât hear you or weâll be in for an earful tomorrow.â
They started to walk down Hallow Lane road to their house. Charisma and her father occupy the first floor of a two floor home in a row of identical homes done us the same. There were street lamps that lit there way every few feet. The wind blew fallen leaves around them as their feet echoed on the cobblestone street.
âDonât be ridiculous, Fliss. You know only a Pomroy woman can take her place and Iâm not a Pomroy.â
âNo, but her son isâŠâ
Charismaâs jaw dropped that her best friend would even suggest such a thing. âTom? Pimple-faced Tom Pomroy? Isnât he nearly ten years older than us? I would never. Take that back.â She pinched Flossie in the shoulder.
âOuch! Okay, okay, fine. Bad idea. Doesnât mean if given half the chance she wouldnât pass it on to you. As she has no daughter, youâre the closest thing. Unless old pimple-face finds him a wife and has a daughter.â Charisma suddenly stopped walking. Flossie, a few steps ahead, realized this and turned back to see a concerned look on her friendâs face. âWhat is it?â
âThereâs a strange man standing in front of our house. Donât you notice him?â
Flossie turned back up the street, their building was only a few more yards away on their side of the road. Some buildings had lights on inside but they didnât do much to illuminate a dark figure teetering from side to side in front of their door.
âOh dear. It must be some damn drunk fool who lost his way. I told you, ever since that tavern opened at the other end weâd have this happen. See, I was right.â
âWell, whoever it is, we better help him find his way home. Last thing I need is my father finding some strange man passed out drunk on the doorstep when he comes home in the morning.â
They both approached the swaying man cautiously and managed to flank him on either side before beginning their line of questioning, just in case he should decide to fall over.
âSir, can we help you?â Flossie asked, attempting to keep him still by gripping his right arm and shoulder. Charisma rushed to the front door and turned on their lamp beside the doorway so they could see him more clearly. Perhaps they might recognize him.
âFliss, is thatâŠblood?â Charisma asked, pointing a shaky hand at the manâs abdomen.
He wore a long black overcoat that stretched to his dirt covered boots, a frayed hat concealed his face, though Flossie could see he had a thick beard and mustache, and carried a sack slung over one shoulder.
âHelp me. Heâs getting heavier to hold up,â Flossie said through gritted teeth as she struggled to help him stay upright. He was clearly about to collapse. Charisma grabbed him on the left side and together they managed to lean him against the front door. Flossie unlocked it and all three of them pitched forward into the house, the man hitting the floor with a thud.
âHeavens above,â Flossie said, kicking his feet inside and closing the front door quickly behind them before anyone noticed what had just happened.
The man began to groan as he lay on the ground in the hall. The home was small but contained two apartments. Each with their own living room, kitchen, and two bedrooms. As Charismaâs apartment was easiest to get to, they each grabbed hold of his arms and dragged him as best they could into the living room, turning him over onto his back. He had become far too heavy to get up onto the nearby couch.
âWho do you suppose he is? I donât recognize him.â Flossie removed his hat to get a better look at him by the dim fire that was dying out in the fireplace. Charisma quickly added two logs, bringing it back to life.
âIâve never seen him around here before either. Ever since that tavern we have been getting more and more strangers around here. None of them on our doorstep though,â Charisma said, kneeling down beside him to check his wound. âThis looks much worse than I thought,â she said, placing her hand over the wound and pulling it away to show it covered in blood.
âNot good. Really not good. Hey, you, wake up.â Flossie patted him on either side of his face to rouse him but he just winced in pain.
âThatâs not going to get us anywhere, Fliss. Maybe his bag will tell us who he is.â Charisma started to rifle through his sack which fell open near the front door. It was empty.
Flossie, on the other hand, got a pitcher of water and before she could be stopped, poured it over his head. He gagged and choked and spluttered awake. His eyes opened wide he looked about the room crazily. âHelpâmeâ.â His words were labored and short as he was unable to take a breath. He reached out a hand. Flossie pulled away but Charisma was unafraid of him. He reminded her of her father and she hoped that if he were ever in danger, that someone would help him. She knelt beside him and took his hand in hers. He focused his eyes on her, deep black pools there would soon be lost forever. âTakeâthisâpleaseâ.â He reached in his coat pocket and with a shaking hand covered in tiny scratches, he placed something in her hand, and held it tightly between them. âYouâmustnâtâbe afraid.â He coughed and blood trickled out the corner of his mouth.
Flossie put a hand on Charismaâs shoulder for support.
âYourâdestinedâto be greatâŠâ The last words be spoke before he took his last breath. His hand fell away from hers. She stared at him for what seemed like eternity forgetting where she was or what had just happened. She blinked and one tear fell down her cheek.
âCharisma,â Flossie said, her voice bringing her back to the present, âWhat is that?â She pointed down at Charismaâs hand.
She glanced down and stood up immediately, her eyes never leaving its sight. âNot possible.â She tossed it onto the dining table.Â
Flossie turned up the light over the table and looked at it closely without touching it. She turned her head towards Charisma with a smile. âIt is indeed. Youâve just been given the most wanted item in all of Wondermere. Damn I hate your luck!â
âThis isnât funny, Fliss. If thatâs what we both think it is, I could be dead by morning.â
âAnd if it isnât, youâve still got a dead body on your hands to deal with. That might send you to the gallows just as easily. So why not this!â Flossie said, reaching her hand out to pick it up before turning to Charisma for permission first. Charisma nodded her consent. âWe should open it, donât you think?â
âAbsolutely not,â Charisma said and snatched it out of Flossieâs hands.Â
âBut we need to be sure it is what we think first before we can be sure what to do about it, right? Itâs the only logical thing to do.â
âThe logical thing to do would be for me to take it and chuck it in the fire right now. Forget we ever saw it or knew it existed.â
âThatâs a terrible idea,â Flossie said, taking a seat at the dining table. âDamn, I wish I smoked cigarettes. This is the moment when Kinter or Turpin would light a pipe while they discuss the case.â
âThe case? What case? There is no case, Fliss. If I get rid of this no one will be any the wiser.â
âWhy do I seem to be the only one remembering the dead man lying on your floor? Do you plan on putting him in the fire too? Iâve read up on things like this and your small fire would hardly get rid of a dead body. No, what weâve got to do is put him somewhere until we find out what this is all about. Itâs what Kinter and Turpin would do, surely.â
Charisma flopped down in the chair opposite Flossie in defeat. She knew her friend was right. She also was just as curious about this thing she was just given. She placed it gently down on the table and rested her chin on the table beside it, staring at it, daring herself to open it.
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As I closed the 2023 chapter I looked back at all I had done. It was a crazy year filled with many memories. But now that itâs the first day of 2024 I donât want to slow down, not for one moment. Thatâs why today there will be two other emails besides this one youâll receive. It just so happens that the first of the year coincides with the first episode of my mystery serial, Sleight of Hand. If you havenât heard about it, might I suggest reading this or this. And as is my daily habit for the last 7 months, a 100 word story is coming. For the next 31 days of January Iâll be taking a look at my favorite Twilight Zone episodes (some well known, others not so well known) and using their title as a prompt for my story. I hope youâll share with me if any of the episodes I select from the original 156 are favorites of yours as well.
Before I share with you my hopes and dreams for the year, as well as my Word of the Year, I want to first say thank you for making last year so great. I got my first paid subscriber, I was consistent with my writing for the first time in a long time, and I found a great group of fellow writers just by spending time in Substack Notes.
Iâve made some major changes to Paid Subscriptions, mainly the amount and rewards. Read all about them HERE. And consider becoming an annual subscriber to get 25% off:
RESOLUTIONS
*I try not to put too much pressure on myself with these resolutions and you shouldnât either. Whatâs important is to have a plan whether itâs followed or not.
Write and release one serial weekly.
Write 366 100 Word Stories. One for each day in 2024.
Release at least 3 100 Word Story collections to Paid Subscribers and for purchase online.
Read-Along for Books 5 – 8 of The Famous 40 Oz Series.
Read-Along for The Pickwick Papers by Charles Dickens.
Enter one reputable fiction writing contest.
And thatâs it. Anything else that happens will simply be icing on the cake and I will be all the more grateful for it.
WORD OF THE YEAR
Every year I like to pick one word to help me navigate the year with. One word that will not only prop me up when Iâm feeling overwhelmed or like I canât do it but can also remind me of what Iâm hoping to accomplish. It might seem like a heavy burden for one word to carry but when I set out to find the perfect word for me this year it came to me in an instantâŠ
Cornelius: No, I didnât figure out my word of the year for Substack in just a day. It was much quicker than that. An hour – no, even thatâs too long! Whatâs less than a minute?
Man: A second?
Cornelius: Less than that!
Woman: A moment.
Cornelius: Thatâs it! That is it!
And now, ladies and gentlemen (and everyone in between), I present to you đ„đ„
ADVENTURE
noun
1a: an undertaking usually involving danger and unknown risks
b: the encountering of risks
2: an exciting or remarkable experience
verb
1: to expose to danger or loss : VENTURE
2: to venture upon : TRY
I look forward to 2024 being an adventure for me. I intend to write what Iâve never written before. Learn things that motivate and excite me. And when opportunity knocks I want to be ready to answer.
THE WINNERS AREâŠ
It was around Thanksgiving when I decided to give away as many comps as I could for as long a period of time as I could in 2024. I wanted to give thanks to the community and so, here are the winners and the length of comped time they won.
Thank you to all of you for your participation and for taking the time to indulge my imagination with your own storytelling talents. If youâre wondering how long your comp is, find your name below:
3 MONTHS COMP
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6 MONTHS COMP
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1 YEAR COMP
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2 YEAR COMP
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EDWs CHOICE (1 YR COMP)
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This went so well I intend on doing it all over again in November 2024. Till then, I hope all the stories I create and the reading you undertake will make this year an adventurous one for us all.
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HEARD ROUND THE STACKS
In November I was interviewed by of Plotted Out. I meant to include this in my December 2023 First Edition and for some reason I completely forgot. I hope you give this a listen because it was a great interview and the first one Iâve ever been asked to do by a fellow Substack fiction writer.
If youâre wondering why Iâm mentioning this interview to start the new year, there is always a method to my decisions and to find out about this one youâll just have to stick around to find outâŠ
Itâs my time to go. Iâve lived many millennia up here, watching you watch me. Just out of reach. Only on a few occasions did you visit. More like a drive by.
Then, I winked at a little girl. And she waved back at me. We talked to each other every night like old friends. But sheâs older now. Moved on. As I now must do.
The hour is drawing near. Billions of my friends are here to wish me goodbye. All of them secretly waiting for their time to come.
In the last six weeks he chopped hundreds of Christmas trees for families, couples, singles. But now that it was the last day, the last hour, the last family, he dragged his axe behind him through the desolate wasteland where it once was rich with pines.
The back of the blade bounced on the frozen ground, its sharp edge worn away from use but it still could get the job done.
He led them towards the farthest end of the field where the last of the trees stood. Unnoticed by planting circumstance. He wiped his brow and swung the axe.
They could hear the house crunch from the force of the santa-leaves outside. It was the middle of winter but they were prepared with more than enough food to get them through as long as no one opened a door or window.
The fireplace was maintained day and night as santa-leaves were terrified of fire. Otherwise, they moved faster than man or beast to wrap anything living till the life is squeezed out of them.
A little girl made sure no one could see her slowly open her bedroom window to get a better look at the plant climbing inside.