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  • Free Writing Fridays #040

    Your 100 Word Story

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  • Cursed Carousel | A 100 Word Story

    #284 Creatures of the Night

    The carousel in the store window spun round as people walked by. None glanced its way. Even after it was marked down from its original price many years ago.

    The other toys and trinkets featured alongside it would catch the eye of a young child who begged their mum and dad to buy it for them or they’d have a tantrum. In they come, get the toy next to the carousel and leave.

    Then one day a mute girl signed to her mother that she wanted a closer look at the carousel. She touched it and suddenly began to speak.

  • Vera (An ITV Original Review)

    I can list a couple reason why I’m reviewing this series that I only just started watching on BritBox a few weeks ago:

    1. I created this Substack for reviewing these kinds of shows.

    2. I had been rewatching Midsomer Murders and needed a break from it but couldn’t figure out why until now.

    3. Series 6 Episode 1 Dark Road truly gutted me to bits.

    Okay, let me jump back to the second reason. I love Midsomer Murders. I must since I’ve rewatched seasons 1 to 13 over again. Tom Barnaby is my Barnaby. No offense to his cousin, John. Anyway, there was something about watching all those episodes back-to-back that made me need a bit of a break so I decided now was as good a time as any to try one of these other British mysteries that I’ve had on my radar but just wasn’t sure about devoting any real time towards watching.

    Vera was one of those shows and it did not disappoint. Which leads me back to what the reason was for this break I needed; murders. Why on earth does Midsomer have to have like four or more dead bodies per episode? It’s a lot. And I didn’t realize just how much until I watched Series 6 Episode 3 The Moth Catcher of Vera. I’ll get to the earlier episode in a second.

    The Moth Catcher is significant because it’s solving a double murder. Until that point, and I’ll have to confirm this on my rewatch, but I’m almost positive that each episode just has one murder to solve. That’s it. 90 minutes to solve one murder. That might seem like a slow burn but it actually works. And I love it.

    Which brings to mind some other mystery shows I’ve watched that have their own distinct differences depending on what kind of mystery you’re looking to solve. Perhaps I’ll do an essay discussing just what they are and you can decide which you’d like to watch. I’ll say on a scale of no murder to bloody mess, Midsomer is definitely a bloody mess, while Vera is closer to the no murder side of the scale.

    Anywho, what also made this episode vastly different, and which I appreciated, was that the two murders had already taken place not ten minutes after it started. It’s not like some other shows where there’s a murder every night till it’s solved and the bodies are piling up and the killer is actively killing. No, usually, and what I believe to make sure sense is that the killer is only looking to kill one person for a reason and that’s it. Very rarely is a killer out there to murder a whole host of people, though Midsomer would have you think differently.

    Now, back to Series 6 Episode 1 Dark Road. I won’t give any spoilers, or at least I will try not to, but there is a character in the episode who we see, briefly in an earlier series. I assumed she was written out of the show cause she was there for like one episode and that was that. So I was pleasantly surprised when she was back several series later. Yay! Cause I liked her.

    In truth, the series starts with another female character of color who is sort of like a mentee to Vera. I was sad when she left the show. But then it happened again where she’s there one day, gone the next, then back and I hope it’s for good.

    And there was this point where Vera turns to this girl, who by the way is pissed cause she was trying to transfer out to the major crimes division but is passed over for someone else, and says to her “one day this will all be yours; the mack, the hat, the boots.” Then Vera gets in her jeep and drives away. I don’t know. There was something about the way she said it and then smiled.

    You have to see it to know what I mean cause what happens next just gutted me to pieces. It’s rare for an episode of a show to do that to me. I can count on one hand the episodes from various series that have gutted me and I can honestly say I’ve added another to the list.

    On my scale of 1 to 10 for recommending? If you like any British mystery series and you’re looking for something you haven’t tried yet, do yourself a favor and give Vera a try. She’s a total hard ass, passionate, and just the kind of character who truly wears the scars she has all over her. I give the actress who portrays her, Brenda Blethyn, a lot of credit for this role.

    I look forward to watching the next 6 series so I can catch up with everyone else.

    What British mystery series do you love? Let me know in the comments or by hitting reply to this email and if you are going to give Vera a try for the first time let me know what you think.

  • Killer Keys – Part 2

    An Anatomy of Typewriters Story

    The story you are about to read may be based on a true story. Names and locations have been changed to protect the innocent and the dead.

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    The following morning Nat woke up to the sun peeking through a twisted blind and striking her right on her closed eyes. She opened one eye and looked around. She was definitely still in her apartment which was at least one positive. She couldn’t remember how she got into bed although she still wore the clothes she had on the day before. 

    She managed to push herself into a sitting up position in bed and picked up her cellphone to see the time when it started to squeal in her hand. It was the perfect ringtone after all.

    Suddenly, she remembered having ignored her boss all day yesterday. It might work for one day but not two days in a row. She had to answer it. Like her old teacher taught her, she put a smile on her face and answered the call.

    “Hi Bernice. I’m so sorry I missed your calls yesterday. I was tied up—”

    “Spare me the bullshit, Nat. You better have something for me or I swear to God I’m cutting you loose this time,” Bernice said. She could hear her through the phone popping open a medicine bottle. That was her way. She was always a bundle of frazzled nerves. Always taking a pill for this or that ailment. She never let a moment pass her by on the phone when she wasn’t consuming some medication. Nat often wondered if she did this with everyone she spoke to and if so, how she hadn’t overdosed on these medications by now.

    “Of course I’ve got something,” Nat said, clearly trying to use some stalling tactics while she went to her laptop in the hopes of unearthing some old gem she could submit till she could get her act together to write something better. When she sat down at her chair she saw the paper in her typewriter had words on it. Several in fact. All the way to the bottom of the page where she read the words “THE END” dead center.

    “You better not be fucking with me, Nat. And don’t try sending me something you wrote when you were in high school. You tried that before and quite frankly, your early work sucks.” Bernice moved the phone away from her mouth while she popped a pill and chugged water to swallow it.

    Nat looked beside the typewriter and found pages turned face down beside it. She picked up the stack and found five fully typed out pages with a title at the top, also dead center, that read “THE SHADOW KILLER.”

    How was this even possible she thought to herself.

    “HELLO? Are you still with us, Nat?”

    “Uh, yes. I mean, no. Nothing from high school. I’ll bring it in today. This morning,” Nat said, fumbling her words as the memory of the alcohol she drank the day before returned. Her friends always teased her for being such a light weight. But to have had so much she forgot having written an entire short story?

    “Bring it in? Just email it to me,” Bernice said.

    “I can’t. I…It’s typed on a typewriter,” Nat said, realizing how silly that will probably sound to Bernice. No one uses a typewriter anymore.

    “A typewriter? My, aren’t we fancy. Fine,” she said, moving the phone away from her mouth again, this time to cough so violently Nat thought she surely hacked up a hair ball. “I’ll be in the office till one this afternoon. You better bring me something, Nat or I swear to God—”

    “Yes, Bernice. Or you’ll make me wish I stayed in the obits department,” Nat said, rolling her eyes.

    “Careful, Nat or the next obit we write will be yours,” Bernice said before hanging up. She always had to have the last word.

    “Bitch.”

    Nat grabbed the pages and pulled the last page from the typewriter. She eyed it strangely, a memory of tapping came to her mind but she couldn’t quite place it. 

    Bernice is the managing editor of a fairly prestigious magazine. It was more like an institution now that the world was turning digital but Bernice was determined to keep things as they always have been. 

    “If it was good enough in the 1900’s then it’s damn well good enough now. Our readers will see to that,” she always said at just about every team meeting.

    The magazine was meant to be part fiction with flowery obituaries thrown in from the past and the present. It was the fiction that made the magazine a staple in the community. To this day many known writers got their start where Nat is right now and she knew it. The last thing she wanted to do was blow this once in a lifetime opportunity. A stepping stone to a real career in the arts. A way to let her family know her writing and daydreaming wasn’t for nothing.

    She handed the pages to Bernice who prided herself in being a speed reader. She leaned back in her chair, surrounded by stacks upon stacks of paper. Each one a manuscript some poor sod had sent in to the magazine in the hopes of discovery. Bernice hated them all but she refused to throw them out. It made her feel more important than she really was. Sure, she got to pick the winners and losers but she was getting on in age and would need to retire eventually. Give up the power to someone else younger and with their own vision for the place. 

    Whenever Nat and Bernice didn’t see eye-to-eye, Nat wished the piles of paper would just fall over onto her and crush her when no one was around. She didn’t wish that today as she sat in the chair on the other side of Bernice’s desk and waited.

    Nat let her eyes wander the room while she waited. Photos that could’ve been photoshopped of Bernice shaking hands with politicians and celebrities. Many of them were dead or Nat didn’t think were so popular today but they had pride of place on the walls and on bookshelves. 

    Bernice slammed the pages down on the desk so hard it made Nat jump in her seat. She pulled off her reading glasses and let them fall, resting on her cleavage from their tether. She stared at Nat who suddenly felt like she was being inspected under a microscope and it made her palms sweaty.

    “This… is… brilliant!” She shouted. “Chris! Chris, get your butt in here now!” She continued to shout, this time over Nat’s head and through the shut door. 

    Her office was behind floor to ceiling glass so she could see everyone in the office. Nat turned in her chair to see Chris stand up from her chair, a pencil keeping her hair up and her brown rimmed glasses dangling on the edge of her nose. She wore platform shoes that added about six inches to her height but were so heavy she hunched over when she walked in them for fear she’d fall over.

    “Yes, boss,” Chris said, opening the office door and sticking her head in.

    Everyone knew Chris was going to be Bernice’s replacement. Bernice wouldn’t say it but she knew it would be Chris as well. It’s why, for the last year, whenever she made any important decisions involving the magazine she made sure Chris was in the room when it happened.

    “Read this and tell me what you think?” The ultimate test. Chris was being asked for her opinion. She had no idea if Bernice’s enthusiasm was one of excitement at having read something brilliant or satisfaction at having read the worst crap ever to cross her desk. Nat wasn’t sure either and now had to sit patiently while someone else read the story she didn’t even remember writing.

    Chris planted herself in the seat beside Nat and just said, “wow.”

    “Is that good?” Nat asked, unable to remain silent any longer.

    “Is that good?” Bernice repeated mockingly. “Is that good?” Her voice louder. She looked at Chris to finish her thought.

    “It’s probably the best piece of writing I’ve read in the last decade,” Chris said, cautiously. She looked at Bernice and hoped she would say the same.

    Bernice nodded. “Two, possibly even three decades I’d say. Easily.” Nat breathed a sigh of relief. Her job was saved at least for now. “Make sure this gets in the next issue.”

    “You mean the one going to press tomorrow? But we already sent the files last night,” Chris said, a note of panic in her voice.

    “Well, unsend them. Get on the phone right now and tell them we have a last minute edition. Bump whatever you have to, but get this one in. Our readers will love it!” Bernice said, waving for both of them to leave her office. She chuckled to herself and the last thing Nat heard as she left Bernice’s office was, “shadow killer. Brilliant.”

    Nat hadn’t expected her story to go so well, especially as she doesn’t remember writing it, let alone what it’s about. The whole way home on the bus she tried to remember the events of last night. Tried to picture herself sitting at the typewriter writing a story, this story, the one she left in the capable hands of Bernice and Chris. She wished she had asked for a copy before she left but figured she’d just read it when it hit the newsstands tomorrow.

    The next morning, Nat made her breakfast like she always does; toast and coffee. She sipped and dipped while listening to classical music. The time had come for her to check her emails and organize her plans for the day when she saw the typewriter. It had a page in it. She remembered distinctly not putting paper in it the night before. And yet here it was.

    Not only did it have a paper in it but she watched as it typed out letters on to the page all on its own. One letter at a time was pressed and with the strike of each onto the page she walked closer to it to see what it was typing.

    Nat slowly sat down in her chair in disbelief. She did just see her typewriter act on its own and type without the aid of anyone and yet it couldn’t be. Surely there was some trick to it? Her great uncle must’ve sent it as some sort of gag gift.

    Her phone rang and for the first time in a long time she answered it without first screening the caller ID or listening to the ringtone to alert her.

    “You will be careful, won’t you?” It was Nat’s mother on the phone and as usual she seemed to be starting their conversation in the middle without any context.

    “What?” Nat asked, an air of frustration in her voice. The last thing she needed right now was to play a game of twenty questions with her overbearing mother.

    “Have you not seen the news? It seems the police have kept an investigation from the public that they now feel we ought to know. Typical of them to do that, isn’t it? Wait till the fifth body drops and all of a sudden they think ‘okay, we better tell people now.’ I mean, that could’ve been me.”

    “Mom, I really wish you’d just say whatever it is you’re trying to say instead of talking at me like I’ve just been in the room with you for the last sixty years of your life! Jesus H.—”

    “Do not speak the Lord’s name in vain, please. I raised you better. I’m glad to hear you’re so concerned for your mother. Especially, as now she’s living in the same town as a serial killer.”

    Nat got very quiet. Her mother was prone to over exaggeration and if that’s what this was she was in no mood to play.

    “Mom, what are you on about?”

    “The Shadow Killer, dear. It’s been on the news all morning. Everyone is talking about him. Stalks his victims in the night. Usually woman who all look like me, quite frankly. Or maybe like me when I was your age…” she said, her voice trailing off. “Come to think of it, these women do look a bit like you.”

    “Sorry, did you just say ‘Shadow Killer’?” I asked. “Are you sure you’re not just reading my story? Though how you got your hands on it already…”

    “This isn’t one of your fantasy stories, dear. This is real life. Do yourself a favor and listen to talk radio in the mornings instead of all that classical music, you might learn something valuable. You know, maybe you can write about this serial killer and be a real journalist.”

    “Uh, mom, my boss is on the other line. Sorry, gotta go. Bye.” Nat quickly hung up before her mother could say another word. It was her own fault for answering the phone. She would’ve guessed how it was going to go. The same way every conversation with her mother always goes. Inevitably she brings up the lack of a real job and Nat finds a reason to hang up.

    But why did she mention the Shadow Killer? Wasn’t that the name of her story? She had to be sure so she got dressed to head down to the newsstand on the corner. They always got in her magazine specially, ever since the owner found out she would be featured in it. His very own celebrity. It made her cringe to see the picture he insisted taking of her that one time holding up her own article in front of his newsstand but because of it she was able to get whatever she wanted there for free.

    Fresh out the shower and dressed, Nat hoped the newsstand would be crowded with people. It meant there would be no time for small talk. As she exited her building and made a left she looked up to the sky and gave thanks for small miracles.

  • Charmed Tea | A 100 Word Story

    #283 Creatures of the Night

    The line went down the street and wrapped around the corner. People started joining the line before dawn. Everyone wants a cup of Eugenia’s Tea. She only brews one batch per day until it’s sold out but anyone lucky enough to get a cup finds themselves having the best day of their life.

    A lady near the back tries offering large sums of money to cut in line. But no one is willing to sell their spot. Not even for all the money she can offer.

    The sign over the door comes on. She pours the first cup of wishes*.

    *The last word can be replaced by many options I didn’t know which to use so I’m leaving the other ones I came up with here: dreams / magic / tea / luck / change. You can also insert your own word too.
  • The Way To Garrigill – Flossie

    EPISODE 6 of 12 – Sleight of Hand

    An unexpected relation of Felix’s happens to overhear the plans being hatched by Charisma, Flossie, and Felix and injects himself into their scheme. With little hope of moving forward without him they tell him everything that’s happened and he tells Charisma something that will change her life forever.

    TOLD FROM THE POV OF FLOSSIE

    Words = 2,546 | Read Time = 10min 11sec

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    They heard the gruff and gravely voice first but it was the distinct cigar smell that made Felix stiffen. He’d recognize it anywhere and felt his old age catching up to him that he didn’t look around before they sat down and starting talking. He knew whatever was about to happen would likely not go well but he steeled himself as best be could before turning around with a wide grin on his face to welcome his cousin, Orson Lyford.

    Off all the Lyford magicians still alive, and currently out of work, Orson was the one who held a grudge against Felix the hardest. It wasn’t so much the shame but what happened to his favorite aunt shortly after. When she took her own life it shattered the Lyford family irreparably and Orson holds Felix personally responsible for Aunt Bea’s tragic death.

    “Dear cousin,” Felix said, his eyes shocked by the state of his cousin who he hadn’t seen in over a decade. In truth, he likely wouldn’t even have recognized his cousin were it not for the combination of his voice and the cigar smell. It was a brand the men in his family smoked regularly. It was nice to see old habits didn’t go away, but that was all the nice he was going to get. “I didn’t see you there.”

    Orson shoved out of his seat so he could get a better look at Felix. Each step he took was accompanied by a distinct stomp on the floor from a wooden cane he used on his right side to help with his right foot that was wrapped by metal bars on four sides.

    Charisma looked down at his leg in horror. She’d only heard of such a contraption being used on a magician when he suffered an accident on stage a long time ago. But from what she remembered it required absolutely no movement until the fractured bones healed. Judging by the way Orson leaned on his cane to try and keep the weight off his injured one, she could tell it had been some time since he followed doctors orders and because of it he may never be without his cane.

    “You needn’t worry yourself, lass. I barely feel the pain now. I’d have the blasted thing taken off if it weren’t gonna cost me ta have it done. Shift over, cousin. Can’t you see I’m crippled,” Orson said, waving for Felix to slide further into his booth. This did not make Felix feel safe at all as now he was trapped with no means of escape.

    Orson shifted his leg closer to the table and using his can, lifted himself up enough to get into the seat beside Felix, leaving just enough room for his bad foot to stick straight out between Charisma and Flossie under the table.

    “Not that we don’t want you two to reconcile whatever bad blood is clearly between you two, but we were kind of in the middle of something,” Flossie said, hoping Orson would get the hint. But as it was rather difficult for him to get from his booth to theirs, there was very little chance of his leaving so soon.

    “I couldn’t help but overhear you say the word ‘Garrigill’ and naturally my ears perk up. Now, normally I’d inquire what two lovely lasses such as yourselves are doing hanging about with the likes of my dear cousin here,” Orson said, shoving an elbow into Felix’s side. Charisma and Flossie eyed their friend who seemed smaller somehow, sitting next to his cousin who though hunched over slightly, was broader in shoulders and it made him seem like a big man. “But, I remember what Felix was like as a boy. He always did have a way with charming the ladies. Good to see that hasn’t gone away. Speaking of ladies, how is—”

    “Enough, Orson. What is it you want?”

    “It’s not what I want, dear cousin. It’s what you need from me. You see, there’s only two ways I can think of to get inside Garrigill. One is if you’re a member, which you no longer are.”

    “And the other way?” Flossie asked, her curiosity buzzing as her leg starting bouncing under the table. Charisma knew whenever Flossie did that it meant she was getting really excited.

    “If you’re dead. All magicians, even the former ones,” Orson said, glancing in Felix’s direction, “are given the benefit of a proper service once they’ve passed. It’s the least we can do. And since you’re not dead…”

    “No, I dare say I’m not. And while I want to get to the bottom of who that—” Felix started to say but stopped himself when he remembered they were in mixed company. “Let’s just say I’m not that committed to the cause that I’d die to get us inside.”

    “Now see, that’s where I come in. It just so happens that I can get you in. For a small fee, of course.” Orson rubbed the thumb on his right hand across the other fingers. The universal symbol for money.

    This was when it all came flooding back to Felix. What happened to cousin Orson is what happened to most of the Lyford family after most of them were laughed out of the business or forced to move far away, they drank and gambled. Orson was the best and worst offender. He always managed to keep his head just above water financially so that he never was off his rocker drunk in a ditch but never skint either. Felix guessed his money was obtained from foolish women who found Orson handsome when he was younger and quick with the smiles and tricks. But when the Lyford’s were no longer a household name, Orson disappeared same as Felix. 

    “I’d rather not take you up on your offer, dear cousin. It stinks worse than a week old fish left out in the sun,” Felix said.

    Charisma leaned forward in her seat and whispered to Orson. “How much?”

    “Now, wait a minute—” Felix started but was interrupted by Orson who stared daggers directly at him before returning his gaze towards Charisma with a smile.

    “The lass asked how much and I intend on answering her. See, I offer my services, not for the money. I can get money anywhere. I’m a man of means. No, it’s not money that I want. I’m in search of answers little lass. See, it wasn’t too long ago that Lyford’s were loved by everyone.” Felix rolled his eyes. This was a story he’d heard one too many times and not just from his cousin but other Lyford relations as well. “What I want is to get that back. I want back what was taken from me by him and something tells me whatever you three are cookin’ up will provide exactly what I’m looking for.”

    Felix started to shake his head. “No, you’ve got this all wrong. We’re not on some redemption mission. I’m simply helping out my neighbors and that’s it. When it’s done I return to the comfort of my small life in my small apartment. Whatever you think this is, it’s not. I am truly sorry, Orson. I’ve said it so many times now I’m sure it stopped sounding sincere a long time ago. But what’s been done cannot be undone.”

    His voice cracked under the pressure of his own words. He wished his apology could fix everything that became broken the moment he made his mistake. He wished he could go back in time and never perform on stage that day. He could’ve gotten sick and let someone else do the magic trick. But he can’t. He hated his cousin for being there and bringing it all back to the surface again.

    “What do you say little lass? Give me a reason to do more than just drink,” Orson said. And for the first time his own ache showed in his eyes. They were big and round and hazel, staring, pleading, with Charisma and then over at Flossie.

    “What do you know about the stranger everyone’s talking about?” Flossie blurted out before anyone could stop her.

    Orson’s eyes widened then he furrowed his eyebrows, leaned back and spit on the floor. “That piece of crud. Yeah, I heard of him. Came into town not two nights ago. Stumbled into The Red Boot and started shouting about being chased. I couldn’t make heads nor tales about what he was on about. Then he bumped right into me and with his ranting and raving the bugger pulled out a deck of cards!” Orson paused for a moment to see their reactions. All of them remained silent. Orson smiled. He knew. “Blimey, I thought. If he’s found with that and I’m keeping company with him, we’d both be at the end of a rope come sunrise.”

    “So what did you do? Send him down the street and as far away from you as possible,” Felix said sarcastically. He waited for Orson to contradict him but he didn’t. “That’s exactly what you did, isn’t it? You stupid man.”

    “Oh, and what would you have done? Welcomed him with open arms? I don’t think so.”

    “So, you saw the deck. He actually pulled it out and showed it to you?” Charisma asked. She could feel the bulge of the deck in her hidden pocket and suddenly it was cutting into her unlike any other time of the day. She wanted to take it out and let it breathe. Let herself breathe.

    “I saw it, aye. But I made him put it away. He said he was going to use it to expose the king as a fraud. Whatever that means. I told him he was going to get himself killed if he didn’t stay quiet. Then I took him outside and he wandered off.” Felix shook his head in disbelief. “What? I did the man a favor.”

    “No, you didn’t,” Felix said. “You sent the man to his death.”

    “How do you know? As far as I heard the king is still looking for him.”

    Felix looked over at Flossie who in turn looked over at Charisma. She looked at Orson and said, “He died on my doorstep yesterday. But not before giving me this.” Charisma pulled out the deck of cards and placed it in the middle of the table. “We’re trying to find out why he came to me, who killed him, and who he was. If you want to help us, we accept, but as Felix said, there is no guarantee any of the answers will help you.”

    “Where’s the book?” Orson asked. He didn’t look at Felix but Felix knew he was talking to him. Orson turned his head towards Felix and stopped looked at the deck on the table momentarily to ask his question again. “Where is the book? I know you have it. Well all know you have it.”

    “You mean the codex—” Flossie started. She stopped when Felix shot her a look to shut up.

    “Now see, you wouldn’t know about the codex unless it was told to you specifically. So, you did steal it. I knew it. Well, if you’ve got the deck and you’ve got the codex then that’s it then. They’ve finally been brought together as it was foretold, what, several hundred years ago.”

    “As it was foretold?” Charisma asked.

    “They’re not magicians, Orson. You mustn’t—”

    “Don’t you tell me what I mustn’t do, dear cousin. You created this mess, remember. The way it was explained to us growing us, the deck and the codex belonged to a man who came to Wondermere long before it was even called Wondermere. He performed his magic to anyone and everyone. Anyway, the way it ends is the king’s son, unable to perform even a simple card trick banished the man with his codex and his deck and no one ever heard or saw him again. They say he managed to escape, though no one knows exactly how, and when he did he took his deck and codex with him. He gave the deck to one person and the codex to another. As long as they were separate then I would make it harder for the king or any future kings to completely be rid of card magic which he hoped would make a triumphant return to popularity. Card magic was intended to unite us, not divide us. Didn’t he tell you all this?” Orson said, looked over at Felix. “No, I suppose he wouldn’t have. The codex was entrusted to the Lyford’s and we spent most of our existence trying to find the deck. Last we heard it was on the other side of the world and we would likely never see it again. But we always held out hope. And kept the codex safe. Until it was taken not shortly after Felix, here, ran away. I always knew he took it. His parent’s wouldn’t heard a negative thing against him. But I knew.”

    “Well, we had the codex. But it was taken. That’s why we need to go to Garrigill. The person who took it says we need to go there and bring the deck with us,” Charisma said. Felix wanted to object to telling all this to Orson but he realized it wouldn’t do him much good to argue. His cousin, as much as it pained him to admit it, was right about the only two ways to get into Garrigill. That meant Felix couldn’t get them inside. But he wasn’t so sure Orson could either.

    “I’m in. Before they put me in the ground it will be nice to witness history. The deck and the codex together. Though, are you prepared for what this all means, little lass?”

    Charisma was confused. She looked over at Felix who shrugged his shoulders.

    “Didn’t you bother reading the damn book you stole? What did you steal it for if not to read it?”

    Felix couldn’t answer that. Not now. Not ever. At the time he stole it thinking he could use it as a way to get back in good graces with fellow magicians. But when more and more time went on he realized it would actually make them hate him more when they found out he was the one who stole it. First he embarrasses them, then he steals from them. It was better if he just disappeared and remained hidden for everyone’s sake.

    Ever since then he couldn’t bring himself to read the book. All it did was remind him of the many mistakes he made over the years and how he could never set it right.

    “Well, if you’d bothered to read even the first page you would know that it said, ‘whosoever holds the deck must be willing to perform the magic on the stage to set things right again.’ Which means, if he gave you that deck, you must be willing to use it…at the colosseum.”

    Charisma picked up the deck and for the first time the weight of it was tremendous. It never felt heavier.

    She looked over at Flossie who said, as best friends often do in moments like this when their words of wisdom are needed the most, “Well, damn.”

  • #Pentober52 – VI of LII

    Are you up for the weekly challenge?

    In 2024 let’s broaden our horizons with a weekly writing challenge that calls upon us all to write a story using the prompts below. Just a few guidelines otherwise it wouldn’t be a real challenge now would it:

    • More than 100 words but no more than 200 words.

    • Must use the WORD of the WEEK in your story.

    • Must use at least 2 of the 3 prompts provided (person / place / thing).


    WORD OF THE WEEK

    PERSON | PLACE | THING


    Once you have a story, copy/paste it in the comments! I can’t wait to read what you come up with.

    BONUS

    If you want an added challenge, write a story using the WotW, all 3 prompts, PLUS is exactly 200 words in length.

  • Shadow | A 100 Word Story

    #282 Creatures of the Night

    Their shadows met in secret every night when no one could bear witness but the night owl. While it hooted, they discussed and plotted what to do about the newcomer.

    Rumor has it, she leaves no shadow even under the noonday sun. It was foretold a day would come when shadows would become extinct.

    Everyone would be forced to live in truth where no shadows would be found. Something had to be done of this shadowless walker.

    Peeking through the curtain of her home, she watched the shadows approach. She turned on a light and they scattered into the night.

  • Stitched Doll | A 100 Word Story

    #281 Creatures of the Night

    Made of porcelain limbs and head with a soft stomach, its stitching, thick black thread along the spine, was concealed by a white blouse and yellow dress.

    Ingrid handed the doll to her granddaughter. “My grandmother gave her to me. It was handed down to her and now it’s time for you to have it.”

    “She looks like momma,” the little girl said, smiling up at her grandmother.

    “You miss your momma?” The girl nodded, a tear in her eye. Ingrid cut the thread and inserted a photograph with the others before sewing it. “She can be your momma now.”

  • Toad | A 100 Word Story

    #280 Creatures of the Night

    A map marked the spot of along since abandoned building; Twin Toads. Two Field Laborers were chosen to uncover the treasure for a rick man known as Mr. Sockets.

    “What do you reckon we’ll find down there?” Field Laborer #1 asked, wiping his brow as they decided to break for lunch.

    “Well, I heard ‘him’ talkin’ bout some sort of goggles our ancestors wore. I even seen pictures. Silly lookin’ things over their eyes. Called Peepers,” Field Laborer #2 answered. 

    Tap. Tap. Tap. A wooden stick making contact with the ground made them stand at attention.

    “Get back to work!”